Dave's High School Poetry - 1975

 

I Had No Prior Knowledge

A tune of gaiety exists.
It travels through the wilderness.
And though its course has many twists.
It offers peace through its caress.

An end to conflict and the strife
It brings with it is just a dream.
For hate has taken on a wife,
and both throw murk into the stream.

As scandal spreads throughout the land
And oral messages are speared,
All hope the government has banned --
Alas, our savior's disappeared.

02/12/75

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My second self-challenge poem, still experimenting with structure and punctuation. My first attempts at symbols and metaphors, all overdone to the point of total obscurity.

Most readers are surprised to learn (since my metaphores were way too bizarre) that I was writing about the recent resignation of President Nixon. It seemed like a masculine subject and therefore unchallenging to pick. Also, I had been emotionally moved by drawn out claims and counter-claims by the political partisans (often using bizarrely melodic catch-phrases) and the way that the sudden resignation and pardon had eliminated (actually postponed by twenty plus years) any actual inquiry into those events. I had only passing knowledge of what had happened, but had been tickled one night, years previously, to hear a skit by the comedian Steve Allen where he sat a piano and played what he called his "Watergate Love Songs" (including 'At this point in time .. I think I love you'). To this day I use phrases like 'plausible denial', 'prior knowledge' and 'this point in time' as a sarcastic homage to my earliest encountered political spin meisters.

For what its worth, my reference here to a 'savior' was indeed the biblical one, representing at age fifteen my earliest documented statement of hopeless cynicism.




Originally Written: 1975
Original Web Upload: December 2000
Last Update: April 29, 2001